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Day 2 Of writing 201,and a new challenge.A poem about a gift or gifts.In Acrostic form,Device- Simile.
Now I had to think a lot,as to what I was going to write about.And this is what I came up with.This is my attempt to Day 2’s assignment.My first Acrostic ever! So bare with me.
It is inspired by my mother’s gift to me.Inspired,by a conversation we had years ago.And dedicated to my mother,Mehraj Fathima.Love you mom ❤ 🙂
A Gift For You My Love.
Today my love I gift thee,
A gift my Mother gave me.
Be it a gift,unlike others You will get,
Endowing you with its favours forever.
Never will it be stolen or be found.
Earning the respect for you, of those around.
Forever like the bright sun,
Always may it bring light in your life,if dull.Because,
Cruel life can be,
This gift will always for you,have mercy.
It is the gift of education,
On this day I give,to you my love.
Nursery,your FIRST steps in the long run.
A bright future,happiness for you,And my jobs done.
Take this gift and fly!
-from your dearest mum.
-Sabah Batul 🙂
ranu802 said:
It’s a beautiful poem, yes education is the greatest gift a parent can give her children. 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you.I really appreciate this:)
And yes, it is the best gift a parent can give her child:)
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beryltreesareus said:
I THOUGHT YOUR LAST LINE SAID IT ALL. HAVING HAD CHILDREN MYSELF AND NOW CAN LOOK BACK AND SEE THAT THEY DID JUST THAT, FLEW AND MADE A SUCCESS OF THEIR LIVES. NOT IN TERMS OF RICHES BUT THE QUALITIES IN YOUR POEM.
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you for that….That was so thoughtful.You made my day!
And you sound like an amazing mother!!!
Your kids are very lucky.Happy Blogging:)
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Annie said:
Couldn’t agree more. Education is really key!
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you for reading it.Yes it is!!
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spiritualdragonfly said:
Love this, and the last line does say it all. It’s what I said to my children, spread your wings and fly!!!!
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you for reading it:)
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crashingwords said:
I loved the theme. Very nicely written. 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you:)
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IshmaImroz said:
wow.. You are truly talented my beloved sis! 😀 Loved reading this! ❤
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you so much for that:)
You made me smile 😀
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IshmaImroz said:
hehe thats a small gift I can offer for these precious words to OUR BELOVED mommies!
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SabahBatul. said:
🙂
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IshmaImroz said:
wow amazing! ❤
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you so much for that! 🙂
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Imran Ali said:
The great aim of education is not knowledge but action.
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SabahBatul. said:
That’s a good point! 🙂
What we do with the knowledge we gain,is probably a question every student asks.Some answers are great,and they become legends.And it all started with our mother’s dreams 🙂
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Vibrant said:
It’s a beautiful poem.
What is an Acrostic?
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Google says….acrostic
əˈkrɒstɪk/Submit
noun
a poem, word puzzle, or other composition in which certain letters in each line form a word or words.
My poem makes,Benefaction.
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Vibrant said:
OK. Thanks for taking time to explain. Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
No problem.I would explain it in my own words,but I cam across it today.And am still learning the concept.
Have a good day ahead:)
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Vibrant said:
Acrositc good 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
🙂
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Vibrant said:
🙂 🙂
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Joanne Edith said:
Such lovely sentiment and I like your use of internal rhyming.
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you so much for that:)
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IAmDonovan said:
Hey! I nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award! Details are here if you want to participate! https://coolbeans4.wordpress.com/2015/10/06/nominated-for-the-one-lovely-blog-award-and-the-blogger-recognition-award/
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you so much:) I am honoured that you chose me!
Have a good day ahead:)
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
Wonderful prose. You have a lovely blog. It will be a pleasure following you.
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you…I really appreciate your kind words:)
I feel the same about your blog…Love your dp btw 😛
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ranu802 said:
Thank you dear Sabah. 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Your welcome 🙂
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