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Day 9 with Writing 201.Word-Cold.Form-Concrete Poetry.Device-Epistrophe/Anaphora.
Concrete poetry really got me.But I still gave it a try.
This is my interpretation of the word ‘Cold’.My assignment for today…:)
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
Cold as ice,
with everything nice,
sugar and spice…!
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
My mother-in law is coming over,
and her heart is colder,
than the turkey in the fridge.
But this meal with fix the ridge,
between us.With
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
It was a meet cute.
We soon fell in love!
On our tenth date,For him
I cooked on my stove.With
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
I am a great cook.
That is what steve and my mom say.
But my friends never visit home.
We meet at restaurants searched on google chrome.
If they had come,
They would have tasted,
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
Anyway,I have to unfreeze,
The cold turkey.And make a cold ice tea.
But I see my boyfriend come down…
He looks nervous.
“Hey,what’s wrong?”
Cold sweats run down his cheek.
“You are freaking me out! ”
I say,panicked.
He got down on one knee. “Babe,I love you more
Than I have ever loved before! You make
my heart skip a beat,Every time
I see you.And I didn’t know
my heart could do that,
before you.Will you
Marry me?”
“Yes..Yes!” I screamed with joy!!
And the story of this sweet proposal,
Will be one to tell! Love my boyfriend!
I mean fiance!!! ❤ 😀
And it all happened over dinner.
When I was cooking,
My lucky dish.With,
My recipe for a good turkey 😀
-Sabah Batul.
writersdream9 said:
Joyous post and joyous news!
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SabahBatul. said:
Than you.Too bad it is only a fig of my imagination!lol 😛
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Vibrant said:
It’s a beautiful poem!
I hope you will enjoy it all!
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you:)
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Vibrant said:
🙂 🙂
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incahootswithmuddyboots said:
Fun to read! I especially like the proposal part.
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SabahBatul. said:
Thanks…I imagine the real one to be somewhat like this….Except I have flying doves,and sunsets in mind for the real one 😛 LOL!
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jacquelineobyikocha said:
You sure went all out. Well done!
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you jacqueline 😀
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jacquelineobyikocha said:
You are welcome my dear 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
🙂 🙂
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IshmaImroz said:
Sabah………………U never told me that he proposed you!!! hahahah.. Lolz!! 😛 But the poem is fabulous!!! Even though it’s sadly just a simple imagination!! 😛 I guess I will have to show ur fiancé this poem so that he may try it out once ur Nikah is overrr!! 😛 hahaha I will show this to him.. DEAL! 😛
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SabahBatul. said:
Lol..Deal! 😛
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IshmaImroz said:
hhaaha.. Love this idea!! 😛 Am waiting for that day!!
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SabahBatul. said:
Hahaa….wait a little longer,too young to be married 😛
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IshmaImroz said:
hah naa.. Ua an adult officially in India!! 😛 am coming to meet uncle and aunt.. and I will surely tag a guy along! 😛
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SabahBatul. said:
Lol…no way..! >.<
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IshmaImroz said:
haha NO worries am coming Lady!
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SabahBatul. said:
Do come…would love to meet you 😀
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IshmaImroz said:
hhaha.. but with a guy 😛 for you!
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SabahBatul. said:
Lol…..sabr ..:P
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IshmaImroz said:
It’s sumthing I really lack! 😛
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SabahBatul. said:
🙂 🙂
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SabahBatul. said:
Ishma …mail!! 😛
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IshmaImroz said:
ok deal!
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Beparvah !! said:
only one word beautiful !!!!
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SabahBatul. said:
Thank you!! 🙂
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Beparvah !! said:
:):)
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